Her hair looked better as the ends were curled. Would love to see it shaped up a bit, a little shorter or more styled so she doesn't TOUCH it so much.
She looks the best when with William, and he with her. Their love for each other comes across in the photos
She does need to stop playing with that hair. I don't know if its a nervous factor or she is grooming herself but it makes her look childish. As for the coat it is definitely a matter of personal opinion. I have seen better but I have seen worse. I do think though that her coat did not go with those boots or those black tights/pumps. Hopefully in the future she will wear it with better accessories.